There's also something about the flow of the long sentences. Not that book-Verity doesn't use long sentences, because she does, but these are slightly different. (I just tried reading it in my Verity voice, and it's ever-so-slightly rhythmically different somehow.) I don't know if that's inherent, or if it's the editing showing though.
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Date: 2012-05-23 03:12 pm (UTC)